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jemsea13
4/25/20, 5:19 PM
Love this! I sure hope there is more to come!
4/25/20, 5:13 PM
maybe a bug in the website?
4/25/20, 4:58 PM
love it, very nice
swngbthways
4/25/20, 4:50 PM
I ALWAYS love your imagination and where you take your audience via your characters. I'm looking forward to the NEXT chapter. I wanted to see via a picture, how the three guys look before they were transported to the valley. 😁
swngbthways
4/25/20, 4:32 PM
I would LOVE to see what follows next. I have some theories and hope of what would follow but I don't want to influence you either way and just see where you as the artist is taking this. I love the humanity of your characters, especially Greg. You definitely put me in his shoes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/25/20, 4:12 PM
First off, the writing is great and really hot. I like our main character, and the introduction of other NeuroMate users and contractees is interesting and opens up fun uses that might be a bit out of character for the protag. I could see Curtis ending up with Brodie, with maybe Brodie pushing Greg's boundaries OR him becoming an antagonist. Anyways I hope we see more of Brodie and his boy(s) too, what he's done with his Neuromate is interesting and I'm kinda interested in "Boy"'s circumstances as well. (That and Brodie seems particularly twisted so knowing what he gets up to when playing alone would be fun)
Anonymous
4/25/20, 3:58 PM
The only thing missing from this story were showtunes. LOL!! Yes, I agree. The power to control minds and better our world is a great fantsasy. I think the reason why stories on this site rarely go down that path is self-interest. Power allows us to feed our desires. Having things we can't have is a prime desire. As loving as our protagonist in this story is, when he uses his power, he is enforcing his prime desire -- gay, out and proud. Is is heartwarming? Yes. Is is la-la-land? Yes. Was the sex hot? YES. Keep writing. We read stories and novels to escape. This is a great escape.
4/25/20, 3:56 PM
I hope nothing bad happens with Curtis like getting Brodie as a new sponsor...
Anonymous
4/25/20, 3:43 PM
Devilish, as usual!!
4/25/20, 3:13 PM
No. I have some other stories. I don't know why but this series doesn't come up unless you're signed in. None of these stories have topics that would require safe mode. That's not my style.