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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/22/20, 5:09 PM
Drinking & Drugs, that is my idea of DnD.
Anonymous
4/22/20, 3:16 PM
Interesting!!
Anonymous
4/22/20, 3:14 PM
Funny!
4/22/20, 2:44 PM
I agree about the sudden hard twist. It completely pulled me out of the story, along with the unclear name references. I give it a C-hot idea, uneven execution.
4/22/20, 12:23 PM
solid. tense build up. nice pacing to character ratio. nice use of fetish quick induction but works as know who is and how he becomes other. Even needing to change. getting a chance to see outside looking in.
Ozplays
4/22/20, 11:36 AM
Nice
4/22/20, 8:10 AM
continue this please :)
Michael Schmidt
4/22/20, 7:51 AM
Danke dir, MasterOfHypnosis, für deinen Kommentar. Diese Geschichte entstand mit einigem Abstand zum „Feldherrn“, aber klar: Ich habe einen gewissen Stil, bestimmte Interessen, etc. – da können schon Ähnlichkeiten auftauchen. Für 2020 ist eine neue Geschichte geplant und bereits geschrieben, ich will sie aber noch etwas überarbeiten. Diesmal ohne Hund und mit ein bisschen Magie und Öffentlichkeit.
Aug 16, 2016
4/22/20, 7:14 AM
I missed this story first time round. Where can I find one of these bikes please?
May 6, 2019
4/22/20, 6:02 AM
Thanks so much for the detailed feedback, Darmani. I was trying to do something different from my usual erotic horror here, and that's probably why you found it less satisfying. I was going for comedy here, and that's why the pacing is a little different, because the joke is that she barely gets to know these guys before they suddenly (and from her perspective, inexplicably) turn gay. And then there's a little riff on Sex in the City, where the main character is named Carrie (and in early seasons, the main characters would have a different "problem" boyfriend every week). When Aiden the furniture designer comes in, that's also a Sex in the City reference. So you're right, this could absolutely be told as a slow-paced, suspenseful erotic horror story, but I feel like I've written variations on that story so many times already, I wanted to play around with something different here.