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Apr 20, 2020
Anonymous
4/21/20, 3:07 PM
Story concept is great. I would tighten up the writing a bit. Little editing couldn't hurt. Having said that, this could be a great series. Let your mind go to places that you did not think possible. You've already created a mind control scenario. Take off. I'll read it. I'm intrigued.
Anonymous
4/21/20, 1:56 PM
Makes me so hard. Makes me want to be a CLEAN BOY.
4/21/20, 1:15 PM
Not planning to write a sequel or prequel. I like to keep some elements of the story ambiguous, so that the reader gets a sense that this might be just one piece in a much larger shadowy conspiracy. When I started writing it, I had the idea that Craig would be the mind controller, pimping David out for money. But then I thought it would be hotter to at least raise the possibility that Craig himself is being controlled.
Anonymous
4/21/20, 12:24 PM
Needed more muscle growth.
LongtimeFan
4/21/20, 12:22 PM
Ooh...chilling stuff. That perfect kind of erotic horror that you do so well, Hypnothrill. Amazing!
Anonymous
4/21/20, 12:16 PM
would love to see a prequel to this story. like is craig his master or is craig puppeteerong for someone else?? hot story though, im a fan!
Apr 19, 2020
4/21/20, 11:50 AM
pig meat, Thanks so much!
Apr 19, 2020
4/21/20, 11:42 AM
A very good short story.
Anonymous
4/21/20, 8:55 AM
Loved this story! Did you write any more?
Anonymous
4/21/20, 8:22 AM
WOW!!! So hot. The dick shrinking and humiliation of a cocky stud was fantastic. How about another chapter where he takes down the arrogant cocky school coach or principal? Or a cop/marine. It's hard finding a hot cock shrinking story with just the right level of humiliation.