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4/21/20, 1:31 AM
Well, one thing I have to point out is you're conflating Asian elements together. Shibari is the Japanese practice of binding, but the figures in the story are either Chinese or North Korean. I generally agree with the direction of the story, but the mixing of Asian elements is something that is off-putting about the story.
DB
4/21/20, 1:30 AM
nice hot story. sign me up as the next Colin!
Apr 20, 2020
sweatnosis
4/20/20, 11:17 PM
Will we find out how he was so thoroughly conditioned before he even got to his job "interview"?
4/20/20, 10:05 PM
Who's Jean? Who called whom slut while they're dressing Daniel, and who called whom Sir while they're driving? What's Daniel's role in the store? Who's Robbie and Who's Kareem? I'm assuming those two are the sales clerks, but which one is blond and which one has green eyes? Too many vague things in this chapter it took me out of the story :(
4/20/20, 9:11 PM
Glad to see you back at work on this as per the forum. I truly enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to the other chapters to come.
4/20/20, 8:54 PM
very interesting topic hope to see more parts to this
Apr 20, 2020
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/20/20, 7:42 PM
I'm not an office kind of person, curious to see how they interview for warehouse positions. btw, double check "comfortable" please,
Apr 20, 2020
4/20/20, 7:32 PM
Great potential! Looking forward to seeing what direction this story takes!
Apr 20, 2020
PreppyBoy9
4/20/20, 7:06 PM
I would love to see this story continue and see what happens at orientation!
Apr 19, 2020
nycboot
4/20/20, 6:20 PM
Oh, that's a beautiful story. It's not necessary for Josh to appear (clearly Josh is less enthralled with Derek than Derek with Josh). This is not about a relationship, it's about one man's dealing with his inner demons. Bravo.