Recent Comments

Jake
4/20/20, 2:03 PM
Thanks Martin !!! I did as you suggested while looking at one of my favorite stories to see how the author formatted his. I think the revision I submitted takes acre of all of that and I will reformat chapters 2 and 3 now. Thank you, Jake
Apr 19, 2020
4/20/20, 1:11 PM
Thank you for your kind words... I didn't have forums enabled on my phone, so i've missed comments there... I will consider adding Discord. In the meantime, if you have direct questions feel free to leave them in story comments, and i will try to answer in a timely manner... thanks again for reading!
Foster
4/20/20, 12:42 PM
This story is perfect!! The characters are a joy to read when they interact. I love a good sappy mind control relationship but I would also love to see more corruption as well :O
4/20/20, 12:07 PM
I have never been into smoking. But, that was perfect in every aspect. Loved it.
Alex
4/20/20, 10:12 AM
Hot! But when are we getting another chapter for stacy's dad? its been months since the last one.
Apr 19, 2020
4/20/20, 9:49 AM
i try to respond to every comment posted... nit certain what your asking? My apologies if I've somehow missed something you posted previously
4/20/20, 6:48 AM
Please continue this story. It's SO hot!
Martin
4/20/20, 5:28 AM
Hi Jake, I'm afraid your usage of bold text for direct speech inside a huge wall of text is not really suited for reading. Would you mind reformatting the story to match the usual style where each direct quote is in a separate paragraph (don't forget the empty line between each paragraph!) and separated by quotation marks (") ? Thank you, Martin
4/20/20, 4:58 AM
I hope you update this.
4/20/20, 1:40 AM
Awww, it got dropped right before the climactic conclusion