Recent Comments

4/19/20, 12:51 AM
@Highwayman: Thank you for the comment; I appreciate your support and your defense of my work. I am very much a character and development type of author and I'm glad you see that and are supporting that. I'll try to do my best with this; the story does have an larger structure that I think will become more apparent in the next few parts. It is a bit of fan-fiction as it is spring boarding off of Hypnocigarboy's Symbiote series, so I appreciate you picking up on that. I've got more in store with this story, so please keep reading and supporting it.
4/19/20, 12:40 AM
I am big fan of the series as it's a nice change of pace, well written and intriguing. The writing style reminds me of fan-fiction which is no bad thing. Some stories are porn-without-plot affairs, some are more well rounded, and some of the best (in my opinion) have establishing chapters and development. Do keep up the good work :-D!
4/19/20, 12:26 AM
I foresee that he will indeed play an important part in the future. His mind is deeply tormented at this moment.
4/18/20, 8:31 PM
@Alexander John: Thanks for your comment and support. I think the next chapter will be an interesting one, hope you will keep looking out for it.
4/18/20, 8:16 PM
Yay!!! I'm so excited for more! There is a drought of these kinda stories on Spiral and I literally could not be more grateful to you.
4/18/20, 8:11 PM
Great story ! Can't wait to read more!
Apr 17, 2020
4/18/20, 7:16 PM
So hot. Please keep this going!
4/18/20, 6:29 PM
I wonder what will happen to Jason
Apr 17, 2020
4/18/20, 6:28 PM
This was a pretty hot story. I like your writing style. I hope you'll continue to add more stories in the future, even if its not necessarily for this particular series. The site is quite lucky to have you!
Apr 17, 2020
4/18/20, 6:13 PM
I really enjoyed this. Inventive, well-plotted and paced. Nice build up and a very satisfying conclusion! Don't mind the naysayers, just keep up the good writing.