Recent Comments

4/18/20, 8:16 PM
Yay!!! I'm so excited for more! There is a drought of these kinda stories on Spiral and I literally could not be more grateful to you.
4/18/20, 8:11 PM
Great story ! Can't wait to read more!
Apr 17, 2020
4/18/20, 7:16 PM
So hot. Please keep this going!
4/18/20, 6:29 PM
I wonder what will happen to Jason
Apr 17, 2020
4/18/20, 6:28 PM
This was a pretty hot story. I like your writing style. I hope you'll continue to add more stories in the future, even if its not necessarily for this particular series. The site is quite lucky to have you!
Apr 17, 2020
4/18/20, 6:13 PM
I really enjoyed this. Inventive, well-plotted and paced. Nice build up and a very satisfying conclusion! Don't mind the naysayers, just keep up the good writing.
4/18/20, 5:49 PM
really enjoyed reading this drone story. I hope you will add more chapters later. I want to see if Dronemaster is successfully at world domination.
4/18/20, 5:38 PM
@Hypnothrill: Chapters 3 and 4 were originally one full chapter but I broke them into two to avoid one long chapter; your comment makes me rethink that move. The story will get back to the plan in the next chapter. But I do want to try and be as realistic as possible. Theo does need to be a developed character for me, and there are things in this chapter that do have connections to later events. There is a larger plan at work. Take this as the only chapter that really doesn't have anything that involves the symbiote directly (remember that Ryan's dream did involve the taking of the Coast Guard base, which I might add was inspired by your comment for chapter 2). I think I felt like the story needed a downbeat and not always be driven by the pursuit of the next victim to be converted (this was something I heard from another reader of the story), so the question is can there be room between conversions as one conversion after another does seem to be repetitive. Equally the symbiote would be more strategic in its conversion at the beginning.
4/18/20, 5:28 PM
Great story! I like the idea of a sequel where DroneMaster becomes the first drone to unlock it's original personality, maybe hear the story of how he and DroneMaster2 became drones and why and how they will overtake humanity! Or even a friend of our enslaved protagonist does try very hard to see him, ultimately breaking in, and seeing what has happened. What will the DroneMasters do with him? Either way i look forward to reading more works from you!
4/18/20, 5:11 PM
love the piggy slut transformation. like the other person above said wish the sex part was a little bit longer. hope to see more with this story.