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4/17/20, 1:32 AM
One perfect story! I can't wait for the next chapters and I hope there will be many. It has everything to get me hard! I can't wait to see the slow transformation of the other officers and maybe after that the scene could move to a gym or a college or a fire station.... just saying ;-)
Apr 13, 2020
4/17/20, 1:20 AM
So sorry about that. It was obviously a typo. I meant to type that Miles was fucking his mouth and accidentally wrote asshole instead. Obviously it wasn't going to work and didnt make sense, it was an honest mistake on my part. I just did the edit on that passage. Thank you for catching it.
Apr 13, 2020
4/17/20, 12:12 AM
When they started playing with Red Lightning, you said Miles was occupying his mouth, and then immediately said that he was using his ass. and then the blonde kid was sucking him off? how do you thing that would work? you said the blonde kid was on his knees. something isnt right here.
Anonymous
4/16/20, 11:40 PM
This was so hot! I loved it and am excited for the next one. I do wish the sex scenes were longer though
Anonymous
4/16/20, 10:30 PM
Great story. But, why do I get the feeling Phil hypnotized Kyle as a way to sort of get Chris off of him (Phil) and on to someone else (Kyle). Phil did overhear the first run-in between Chris & Kyle. Just a thought/hunch!
4/16/20, 9:19 PM
@New Guy in Town, I don't doubt that was the case for the first story. It is why this sequel exist in the state that it does. I am talking about the 2nd part of the story, which so far has shown the opposite. Regardless, I am glad I am not the only one who likes that compromise. I think it's the best way to satisfy two audiences.
4/16/20, 6:49 PM
That is a great story. I truly enjoyed it and connected with the characters. Hope there is more to come.
4/16/20, 5:44 PM
I enjoyed this a lot but the names are a bit out of control. Ryan say to Blake "Don't stop sucking Ryan’s cock" while talking about Danny's cock, and at one point, we have "Danny strut about the apartment practically naked, usually wearing only a jockstrap, just as Danny ordered." It's a bit distracting.
Anonymous
4/16/20, 5:05 PM
It's so good cant wait for the next character.
4/16/20, 5:01 PM
@Hagnasty Did you see the feedback for the first part? I like the general idea of the story and will keep my eye on it regardless of what the author does, but I'm not the only one who has read it and wasn't a fan of the diaper fetish. I think your idea is the King Solomon compromise and I agree with you on it.