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4/15/20, 2:22 PM
Good stuff
4/15/20, 2:20 PM
still patiently waiting for the next chapter....
4/15/20, 1:08 PM
Please keep this sequence going.
4/15/20, 12:02 PM
cant wait for an update to this one!
Anonymous
4/15/20, 10:53 AM
Please do more. This is so f*cking hot. Love that no matter what he does he can't cover himself up.
Anonymous
4/15/20, 10:35 AM
I loved the Story. Would like to read more of this charakter. Maybe he punishes someone who is cruel to animals to live as a dog or a monkey. Or a meateater to live a day as a pig. Or he does a classical hypnosis show for fun and using his powers.
4/15/20, 6:34 AM
As someone who spoke up, not against, but neutral to, the diaper theme, I did miss it in this installment because it was such a hot way of delivering the mind control. I'm sorry if you're receiving mixed messages from the community--the most important thing is to write what you find hot! If I'm having to pause and stroke myself while I'm writing, then I know I'm doing it right. Regardless, this chapter was hot, and I'm excited to see where Luis's blank mind ends up!
Kev
4/15/20, 5:11 AM
WOW!!! Damn Cyclops!!! I think you have been in my mind. This seems to be coming directly from all of my deepest desires all mashed up into one story. I can't wait to see what is next for Colin, but more importantly for Hawk and Eagle. Also, I would like to know what happened to Eagle's first partner, Falcon? As for changing the title, as long as it all ties in in the end, I would say only change it if you feel the need. It captured me and caused me to keep reading because I want to know what Hawk wished he had known. Maybe it ties into something we find out at the end when you reveal what happened to Falcon as it happens to another of the men-at-arms. (I could see someone getting so enthralled by the feeling of feeding the Rubber they are permanently enveloped in the Rubber behind the wall in a perpetual feeding frenzy.)
Apr 13, 2020
Anonymous
4/15/20, 4:20 AM
My my, this was a pleasant surprise! Thats some hot stuff you got here. Erotic and decently written
Anonymous
4/15/20, 4:18 AM
hell yes