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Tyl
4/14/20, 5:52 PM
No story has really ever compelled me to make an account, comment, or really rate how much I liked it, but this one is something special. A very hot story, and a great read to see from the PoV of the subject here. As for your English, it's almost impeccable, with a few typos here and there. Overall, I look forward to seeing more, please write quickly!
4/14/20, 5:35 PM
Can understand your nod to the non-diaper audience on Gay Spiral Stories with this chapter, BUT REALLY HOPE you return to the theme of the first chapter. Would love to see how much further Edwards regresses Ryder. Either way, thank you for the time and effort in this amazingly hot, well-written fantasy!
4/14/20, 5:32 PM
It definitely has a different feeling to the story without the diaper aspect. It's interesting that Edwards plays with Edmond using the father figure motif. I'm not too sure about the "Daddy" moniker; I'm sure it's keeping with the vibe you put out with the last chapter. But for me it seems a bit childish and a bit pimpish (pimps have their prostitutes call them daddy) at the same time; Dad or Father work a bit better. Dad would give the sense that Edwards has reworked the fatherly bond making himself Edmond's father and there's some love behind it; Father would give a sense of familial leader vibe, being specific and yet general at the same time. But definitely like the possibilities of where you could go with this leg of the story. Might we see Edmond beside other young men his age in a youth brigade? And might we see Luis cleaned up and sporting a new uniform in Edward's private army? I'll just put those out there for suggestions.
corinthian
4/14/20, 5:08 PM
Very cleverly written and a turn-on too! Thank you.
4/14/20, 4:50 PM
Another great chapter! I'm in awe of the way you've managed to write a mind control story that's so hot and yet so romantic at the same time.
Apr 13, 2020
4/14/20, 4:18 PM
Thanks for the encouraging comments everyone. Dont worry, Red Lightning and the other's perspective will be explored on the next chapter. As for the person above, I'm actually thinking of focusing on Wolfman and The Quaker next. It's goin to be a doozy so stay tuned!
Feb 24, 2020
captainjack114
4/14/20, 3:01 PM
Amazing!Just Amazing!
Apr 13, 2020
4/14/20, 2:20 PM
oof,I LOVE this kind of story. really well done. hope to read more of it soon
Anonymous
4/14/20, 1:59 PM
Fun! Loads of potential. I'm wondering how many readers have said "Eligorn pelagor ..." and their name
Bimarguycnj
4/14/20, 11:40 AM
and the plot thickens lol , cant wait ti read how it ends