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Anonymous
4/14/20, 12:47 AM
I loved this so much! I can't wait for the next one. You're awesome!
4/14/20, 12:26 AM
This is such a great series so far. I hope the guys take Carl down and have double the fun with both Patrick and Carl.
Anonymous
4/13/20, 11:23 PM
Love this its super hot and well written. More please !!
4/13/20, 11:23 PM
marvelous! just marvelous!! a fascinating idea wound together with the rich and bloody history of 16th century Europe. bravo!
Apr 13, 2020
nycboot
4/13/20, 11:06 PM
I've imagined this story to be real life so many times! :)
4/13/20, 9:48 PM
Oh, and I definitely didn't miss that bit about something gym related being the whole reason he came out here in the first place. And the "something to keep you stupid" throwaway comment. You're pressing so many of my buttons here bro! Can't wait for more.
4/13/20, 9:45 PM
Hottest story I've read in a while, and that's really saying something. I have to imagine that they talked about some of this stuff, if only as the narrator's "wouldn't want this in real life, but..." fantasies. Either that, or those hypno docility loops were crazy effective, because I'd have been murderously furious. I LOVE that the tist/Dom/Boss was confident enough to let him leave with his wallet - the psychological impact is so much harder knowing that the narrator is trying to get away but at the same time colluding on some unconscious level - harder for the reader, and harder for *him*, which I'm sure you'll get to. If I have any complaint at all (besides "too short! MOAR!"), it's that he seems to accept that he's already broken a bit too easily at the end there. So many other elements I can relate to and love, from the way he reacts to sleeping in the guy's gym, to the Adidas workout gear-turned-slut clothes (is he wearing Sambas? Superstars? are they well-used and moist with His scent? yeah it's a fetish, lol), to the opaque black contact lenses I've never heard of but now am fascinated with. And I'm a total hypno slut for layered, multi-track, pseudo-subliminal mp3s. Hope we get to hear some of the actual lines used, whether echoing in his memory or when he's exposed to new ones. So looking
Anonymous
4/13/20, 9:43 PM
SN1544 reporting for duty..... Great story, Man. I don't know how I didn't see this one before.
4/13/20, 9:17 PM
Very hot, would definitely like to read more.
Apr 13, 2020
Anonymous
4/13/20, 9:13 PM
Fun story. I would have liked to read more about what Red Lightning was feeling when he started transforming and after he finished transforming. Looking forward to the next chapter!