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4/13/20, 4:34 PM
was hoping he would hypnotize the whole family and get them to fuck each other
Anonymous
4/13/20, 4:33 PM
Thank you for delivering an ending that isn't 'Hollywood-feel good'.
Apr 13, 2020
Anonymous
4/13/20, 4:05 PM
For a first story, this is a really good effort. Well-written for sure. Just be careful not to create typical story lines.
4/13/20, 3:46 PM
That's what I tried to make Smith but it might be more obvious in the next arch.
4/13/20, 3:42 PM
I was expecting someone to end up as a power bottom
4/13/20, 3:09 PM
omg i love your story, really looking forward to the next chapter
Anonymous
4/13/20, 2:46 PM
I'd like to see this go in another direction. Time for him to turn the tables and get the upper hand. After 22 entries the same humiliate, fuck, look what they've done to me cause I'm under his control cycle is a bit repetitive. I don't think you need to keep having him say that he's been hypnotised. Also can't stand the Timmy character/story line. I don't want to sound harsh, as it's one of the better series, I just want it to start going somewhere now and set up an endgame.
Anonymous
4/13/20, 2:38 PM
We all are on quarantine...we need new chapters!! xD
Anonymous
4/13/20, 2:38 PM
Please continue. A great story
Anonymous
4/13/20, 2:22 PM
Not a big fan. Sorry. Too much aggression. I guess I'm a fan of a more subtle way of mind control. good luck though.