Recent Comments

4/10/20, 4:31 PM
will we see more of Smith and Havea?
Anonymous
4/10/20, 4:00 PM
great start, cant wait to read more >;-)
Redan
4/10/20, 3:44 PM
Hm, if you think changing the title would make it more relevant, why not? As it is, the title makes me think that there's going to be some sort of betrayal or that there'll be a catch to all of the amazing rubber, muscle-boy mind control
4/10/20, 3:19 PM
I find it incredibly hot when a hot jock becomes a bottom boy with a sensitive ass. Keeping his muscle while shrinking his dick was even better. Great story.
4/10/20, 2:41 PM
I enjoyed the chapter but not gonna lie i was very excited to see butch finally being that submissive bottom and embracing it and then it just became him as the dominant one, which was disappointing.
4/10/20, 2:05 PM
Hey Spandexlad - thank you for the feedback! I've been a fan of your stories for a very long time. The repeated phrases are there for a reason, but if they don't add anything in the final structure, I think you're right. Removing them might make for a better story. I have been wanting to change the name of the story since it started growing beyond my original plan of three chapters. How will readers react to that? I think a few guys are following along. Would changing the title make it difficult for them to recognize that it's this story?
4/10/20, 1:26 PM
now thats an experience you would never forget.
4/10/20, 1:14 PM
love this series ... please keep them coming.
Spandexlad
4/10/20, 12:52 PM
I've really been enjoying your story. My only critique is that I really think you think about removing the lines that say "If only I knew..." They honestly don't add anything to the story and seem to only be there to make the title make sense (which you should also think about changing). Keep up the great work.
4/10/20, 12:29 PM
@Curious follower: There is a second chapter, you might not be able to read because of the Safe Mode on the site. I've had a few people say they can't read chapter 2. You may have to set up an account to turn the Safe Mode off. But thank you for reading.