Recent Comments

4/10/20, 2:05 PM
Hey Spandexlad - thank you for the feedback! I've been a fan of your stories for a very long time. The repeated phrases are there for a reason, but if they don't add anything in the final structure, I think you're right. Removing them might make for a better story. I have been wanting to change the name of the story since it started growing beyond my original plan of three chapters. How will readers react to that? I think a few guys are following along. Would changing the title make it difficult for them to recognize that it's this story?
4/10/20, 1:26 PM
now thats an experience you would never forget.
4/10/20, 1:14 PM
love this series ... please keep them coming.
Spandexlad
4/10/20, 12:52 PM
I've really been enjoying your story. My only critique is that I really think you think about removing the lines that say "If only I knew..." They honestly don't add anything to the story and seem to only be there to make the title make sense (which you should also think about changing). Keep up the great work.
4/10/20, 12:29 PM
@Curious follower: There is a second chapter, you might not be able to read because of the Safe Mode on the site. I've had a few people say they can't read chapter 2. You may have to set up an account to turn the Safe Mode off. But thank you for reading.
Anonymous
4/10/20, 12:17 PM
Next chapter please !!
4/10/20, 12:09 PM
The forum has private messages. Feel free. :-)
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/10/20, 11:37 AM
I want friends like that & a few pills.
4/10/20, 9:24 AM
Brilliant story that arouses me and scares the living daylight out of me every time
4/10/20, 7:41 AM
I just want to be the next Colin, this chapter hit all the right buttons... even the ones that might be a little sad making. You have a gift!