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4/9/20, 8:40 PM
look forward to seeing more
4/9/20, 8:27 PM
Yes. Justin 4/4 was short of a final edit when the USB stick vanished, apparently for good. I'll rewrite it at some point and take better care of backups in the future. :-/ I have a few outlines for other stories in the same universe. (Michael is probably next.) No promises on the date, but I intend to continue.
4/9/20, 8:21 PM
Looking forward to seeing how Hawk's training progresses, please don't keep us in suspense for too long!
Anonymous
4/9/20, 7:50 PM
Any news?
4/9/20, 7:44 PM
Nice and intresting how they're "heros" yet are using mind control and questionably evil powers to strengthen themsleves. Diffrent from most stories that make the mind control source absolutly evil with no question.
Anonymous
4/9/20, 6:39 PM
more?
Hypnominion
4/9/20, 6:05 PM
Normally, I find these kinds of tropes (behaviors by people who hate what they're being made to do) underwhelming, but I found this one to be particularly engrossing. Well done.
Hypnominion
4/9/20, 5:31 PM
Agreed; this is quite engaging. Hawk needs to get out and actually do some super-heroing (even if a lot of remains off-camera).
4/9/20, 5:20 PM
Definitely like that Hawk has to train to use his powers and just doesn't get them off the bat; the powers have very interesting prospects in their usage. I'm looking forward to seeing what the Right Control does to Colin.
Anonymous
4/9/20, 4:34 PM
would like to see them work their way through the team then the coaches