Recent Comments

4/8/20, 4:18 PM
Hot start. Bit of constructive feedback: try not to just enumerate thing happening, tell the story. Hope to see more from you.
blankbot
4/8/20, 4:15 PM
Nice first effort.
Mar 29, 2019
4/8/20, 4:12 PM
terrific story! HOT!!!
4/8/20, 4:09 PM
The whole loosimg their core and soul smd energy have me shaking my head. It reduces the sexiness a bit and makes it more horror, which isn't fun.
Anonymous
4/8/20, 3:32 PM
So fucking hot. This is a great story, it had me hard the whole time. Frat boys in sport gears...delicious.
Anonymous
4/8/20, 3:26 PM
please please please give details of his new haircut, what kind of style it is and how it makes him and his face look different. this made my dick hard
4/8/20, 3:12 PM
I hope you continue this, because this chapter felt a little bit heavy on backstory. But now I think you have the set-up for a fantastic story about Mike arranging the brainwashing of the new workmen.
4/8/20, 3:12 PM
still really hot!! love the focus on daniels musky scent! wonder what would happen if our main character found a jockstrap daniel used as a cumrag ;)
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/8/20, 2:03 PM
Nicely done. Maybe an alternative football version could happen, like an origin story? I would volunteer to be experimented on in name of science.
Anonymous
4/8/20, 1:39 PM
This needs a sequel