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4/8/20, 1:22 PM
Looking forward to the next part. I loved the last line. Thanks for writing.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/8/20, 11:29 AM
Another very nice piece SIR!
4/8/20, 11:17 AM
Hypnothrill, I loved that. Great technique. Thanks!!
Anonymous
4/8/20, 9:23 AM
awesome. lived something similar w a german roomie in college
Anonymous
4/8/20, 9:08 AM
I loved this so much! so hot! I can not wait to see what happens next. Please stay safe with everything going on too. I love your stories, but your health is more important. I really can't wait for the next part
4/8/20, 7:27 AM
Amazing as always! So fucking hot! Can't wait to see what kind of misadventures Zach is going to get into next!! Please continue and don't take too long to post!
boi98229
4/8/20, 7:17 AM
Scents can be incredibly seductive! Hot story! Thanks so much.
4/8/20, 6:26 AM
Great detail. I enjoyed the set up and the idea of a cosmic deity being involved. I throughly enjoyed the build up and setting up the stage. I don't mind a long story if it builds and adds and you did. I got hooked so now I'm waiting for the next portions. Good story teller
4/8/20, 6:22 AM
great story looking forward to the next chapter... love the whole idea....
boi98229
4/8/20, 5:49 AM
Hey! Thanks for this really hot story! i love mind control and seduction stories, so found these components really compelling. The one thing that might have added to the effect of the story for me is additional detail about how the altered reality came about. Did Jake actually spike the extra beer on the way home? What more exactly are Jake's intent and special powers if any? What exactly is Jake's plan for his new chav bro? In fact the story had enough that i am happy to suspend reality myself to simply accept the somewhat vague inferences, the plot and outcome. In the end maybe it is just so a hot story that i would love it to be longer and more of the same somehow!!