Recent Comments

Evelded
4/7/20, 6:09 PM
Awesome! My favorite GSS writer is back! I was afraid you'd died or found religion or something. :) Now, /please/ write a few more chapters for "Dare Me!"
4/7/20, 6:08 PM
Nice story; I'm a fan for the stories that end with a happy ending. This one ends with a romantic happy ending, so it will get support from me for the challenge (along with a couple of other stories). Even better that it comes out of a collaborative moment with Ng5hvlo4; it's nice to see authors working together on the site.
4/7/20, 6:07 PM
Well done Cap'n. It hits its flow when you get to the masterfully written sex/fetish stuff. I'm not even into rubber and I found it hot. I was pleased the ending gave the couple some depth; it gave me some needed development for both characters but *especially* Yannick.
4/7/20, 5:51 PM
Glad to see you back at work, PupScout. And you're being very ambitious in making the Navy Seals your subject in this story. At first I thought this couldn't be part of the First Time challenge, but then I saw the changes to the rules that allow it. But whether it is in the challenge or not, this is something I definitely will be following to see where you take it.
Apr 6, 2020
Leather Gaymer
4/7/20, 5:31 PM
love the full leather concept need more stories with tight leather pants, etc. great job
Jue
4/7/20, 5:24 PM
We need more plse, this story was beyond fantastic!!!! Love the Hog King 😍😍
4/7/20, 5:19 PM
I'd like to remind everyone reading this that anyone is free to contribute chapters to this series! Varlance and I already have the "main plotline" (which follows every first choice) planned out, but we'd love to see interested readers take a stab at writing other branches (especially failure endings!)
cracker
4/7/20, 4:53 PM
Hey, thanks for comments love feedback even if via my email
Anonymous
4/7/20, 4:17 PM
that was hot be hotter if they fucked your holes too
blankbot
4/7/20, 4:09 PM
Hot!