Recent Comments

Apr 6, 2020
4/6/20, 8:27 PM
It's definitely different from your other works, but it's more complete as we see the fall and the creation of the new subject. Plus the playing off of the writing contest is a very nice touch (a story I am thinking of writing for the contest does something similar). I knew you have the ability to write about things after the fall and here you show it; hopefully this will help you continue with Fragment.
Apr 6, 2020
4/6/20, 7:56 PM
You know it's funny, I was thinking of writing the **exact** same story except the hero suffers a *rejected* submission process; The mind control fails and immediately tries to top the biker character. I'm sure it's just... my mind playing tricks with me. yeah... yeah, I'm sure I'm just imagining things.
Anonymous
4/6/20, 7:54 PM
Do you ever do shoe trades?
Anonymous
4/6/20, 7:53 PM
Do more!
Apr 6, 2020
Martin
4/6/20, 7:26 PM
Cool story. But I just can't allow you to betray all my secrets. Now you've got to collect your 'prize' for your story. You know what to do!
4/6/20, 7:17 PM
continue please
Phil
4/6/20, 5:54 PM
Brilliant story, loved it. Would love rubber to pour out of me.
Anonymous
4/6/20, 5:23 PM
I can't believe I missed this story the first time around. Incredible!!!
Zizi
4/6/20, 5:22 PM
I'd love to wear compression gear, unfortuneately i'm the wrong shape, and size. BooHoo.