Recent Comments

4/5/20, 10:16 PM
MORE, PLEASE! please please please
4/5/20, 10:01 PM
I really love the voyeurism and the complete control -- super-sexy.
4/5/20, 9:58 PM
Since I commented about something I liked about this in another part, I feel like I can make a slightly more negative comment here on the worldbuilding and not be a complete asshole: Wouldn't a fraternity in a majority gay world be having sex together a lot? And wouldn't that expose Jimmy's heterosexuality much earlier? Like other people said earlier, this future world doesn't seem to make a lot of sense. But that said, line by line and scene by scene this was very hot - the background just needed a little more thought to make it work.
Anonymous
4/5/20, 9:49 PM
Fuck that was hot. I've read it twice, and came both times. Excellent, excellent work.
4/5/20, 9:48 PM
I have problems with the overall scenario, but I like Jimmy's take-down here in the van and all the procedures that are done to his helpless body. It reminds me of the kind of things that happen to newly enslaved guys in slavenow stories, if anyone's familiar with that genre of erotica. Very relentless.
4/5/20, 9:47 PM
No fear - more to come! Our villain is yet to truly reveal himself. Some intense mind fucking is coming up (if I can figure out how to get my ideas onto the page)
Martin
4/5/20, 9:03 PM
lovely and soooo cute!
Anonymous
4/5/20, 8:49 PM
Yup, this is still doing it for me. Super curious about the world and what they're protecting it for! Hope this isnt the end
Anonymous
4/5/20, 7:12 PM
Damn i miss GearFetish
Anonymous
4/5/20, 7:01 PM
Fucking hot!