Recent Comments

4/6/20, 3:41 PM
Thank you all for the kind words, the next chapter should be out in the next few days. Some events occur that I want to get right as they set the stage for any future events. Im glad you all like it and appreciate the king words and support.
Anonymous
4/6/20, 3:28 PM
Same! VERY WELL WRITTEN. Now I could only imagine how their dynamics would change AFTER this. 😁
Anonymous
4/6/20, 2:53 PM
OH HOW I WISH!!!
Anonymous
4/6/20, 1:06 PM
Needs a chapter two for all the fucking John gets as his shoes now
Zizi
4/6/20, 12:52 PM
Amazing, and horny without the sex, a fantasy come true for me.
4/6/20, 8:47 AM
would love to see more.
4/6/20, 8:42 AM
Bravo!! I've read this twice now and have been moved to joyful tears each time. Masterfully done!
4/6/20, 7:02 AM
i want to see a chapter with the Nike 270s in pink.
4/6/20, 6:14 AM
*lol* By the time I'd read this comment, I'd been considering another rewrite. I've always had a bit of a problem with 'Show don't Tell' but I'm working on it. It's going to be a total rewrite, so it's going to be a while before I can start the re-edits. Thank you for the feedback, you actually pin pointed my disastifaction, I appreciate it. :)
4/6/20, 3:04 AM
my dick started pre-leaking as soon as i got to the leather heavily pierced piss stinking punk - fuck your stories are hot