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4/6/20, 6:14 AM
*lol* By the time I'd read this comment, I'd been considering another rewrite. I've always had a bit of a problem with 'Show don't Tell' but I'm working on it. It's going to be a total rewrite, so it's going to be a while before I can start the re-edits. Thank you for the feedback, you actually pin pointed my disastifaction, I appreciate it. :)
4/6/20, 3:04 AM
my dick started pre-leaking as soon as i got to the leather heavily pierced piss stinking punk - fuck your stories are hot
Anonymous
4/6/20, 2:54 AM
stupid good txtx
Anonymous
4/6/20, 12:59 AM
This was amazing! I always love when cockshrink is combined with ass growth. I would love to see more of this pair
4/5/20, 11:13 PM
I would love to see more of this story. Awesome! Thanks for writing.
4/5/20, 10:16 PM
MORE, PLEASE! please please please
4/5/20, 10:01 PM
I really love the voyeurism and the complete control -- super-sexy.
4/5/20, 9:58 PM
Since I commented about something I liked about this in another part, I feel like I can make a slightly more negative comment here on the worldbuilding and not be a complete asshole: Wouldn't a fraternity in a majority gay world be having sex together a lot? And wouldn't that expose Jimmy's heterosexuality much earlier? Like other people said earlier, this future world doesn't seem to make a lot of sense. But that said, line by line and scene by scene this was very hot - the background just needed a little more thought to make it work.
Anonymous
4/5/20, 9:49 PM
Fuck that was hot. I've read it twice, and came both times. Excellent, excellent work.
4/5/20, 9:48 PM
I have problems with the overall scenario, but I like Jimmy's take-down here in the van and all the procedures that are done to his helpless body. It reminds me of the kind of things that happen to newly enslaved guys in slavenow stories, if anyone's familiar with that genre of erotica. Very relentless.