Recent Comments

12/15/24, 2:42 PM
Wow man, such a great writer. Not only a hot story, but also well told. Can't wait for your next story. The only thing is the narrative with I and you. It is a bit confusing. Who? Me? Next time consider to use third person (Not sure if this is proper English, sorry, non native speaker)
Tom
12/15/24, 2:19 PM
Great concept, well written. Loved Coach MacAlpine’s transformation - as well as Dan’s!
12/15/24, 2:06 PM
This might be my favourite story ever on this page.
12/15/24, 1:04 PM
This was fucking amazing.
12/15/24, 9:39 AM
So dark, but so hot! I loved it!
12/15/24, 4:53 AM
love reading this story, it's wonderful! i would like to inform ya of some errors which haven't been fixed since it's publication... the word ++_'prize' was written as price_++ (in two previous chapters. i can't name right now?:confused:) i'm re-reading stacy's dad & going add it to my curated list of stories after i finish it!:) **this was review was written out on 11/9/24**
12/15/24, 2:07 AM
Fantastic chapter. And you know what’s on loop in my head? “… like a virgin, touched for the very first time…” ❤️
12/15/24, 1:48 AM
This was a great story! Perfect for the holidays. I’m looking forward to reading your other writing.
Evan
4/9/22, 12:09 PM
Another brilliant chapter. GoonNoob, you are fantastic. The writing is great, the characters are fantastic, the content is hot and it also has a touch of romance and sweetness. I love it all. I did think to myself that messing with a DubCon app was probably unwise (not that anyone in-universe would know that) but I wasn't expecting the turn around so soon. It was so much fun.

4/9/22, 3:37 PM
Thanks @Evan. Like the last story, I think the romance springs up from me as a way of reward for all the bad stuff I hurl my characters' way. One rule of my stories; you don't fuck with Dubcon. They will find out.

12/15/24, 1:35 AM
@[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535) I am so enthralled with this story and your ominous warning about Dubcon that i can't help wanting to fuck with Dubcon just to see what kind of reaction i might get. You can bet I'll be reading more of your stories with the excited intent to find a perfect way to fuck with Dubcon. I also wanted to tell you that i love your profile intro. You are totally but so lovingly twisted. I wish I could DM you but like your kinky enticing mind, my profile has been fucked up somehow and i am unable to access the forum or send direct messages. I do hope you get to read this and get a true sense of my adoring admiration for you and your amazing creativity. Bye for now. [I'm off to see the wizard. I _will_ find out what's really behind the curtain. ...Dubcon beware! ]
Dean
12/15/24, 1:24 AM
If I weren't locked myself right now I would have beaten my cock to death. Super Hot!