Recent Comments

Sexcrab
4/3/20, 5:38 PM
Exactly who is controlling who in this story? I love this so much.
4/3/20, 5:27 PM
And everything is right with Pine's world: his mom accepts that he's gay and with Mikey; Mikey and Pine get to relive prom together. Another fitting end for a Pine and Mikey story.
4/3/20, 5:14 PM
Please keep up this story - it's great!!!
Apr 2, 2020
Anonymous
4/3/20, 5:11 PM
this story is so hot i read it for my morning wanks. Seriously, it hits A LOT of boxes, and we need more queer/bi / pan transformation and hypnosis porn. ending the story with them all being different was *chefs kiss*. please write more!
4/3/20, 5:08 PM
That as hot man.
4/3/20, 5:00 PM
welcome back Ethan
swngbthways
4/3/20, 4:19 PM
EXCELLENT story!
Regular Reader and published author
4/3/20, 3:15 PM
Good writing especially for a novice. The story suffers from a common problem in gay porn literature, ultra extreme fantasy that stretches almost to the point of silliness.
swngbthways
4/3/20, 3:13 PM
I like the direction you're taking this series. You're humanizing your characters. It makes the story not only relatable but believable as well. Pine is gay and 18 and came into some powers. Who WOULDN'T do what he did? :) I love that he now has Mike by his side as well. I'm a fan of this series and find myself looking forward to the next chapter!
Apr 2, 2020
4/3/20, 2:20 PM
Yup! That one checks off a lot of boxes for me