Recent Comments

Regular Reader and published author
4/3/20, 3:15 PM
Good writing especially for a novice. The story suffers from a common problem in gay porn literature, ultra extreme fantasy that stretches almost to the point of silliness.
swngbthways
4/3/20, 3:13 PM
I like the direction you're taking this series. You're humanizing your characters. It makes the story not only relatable but believable as well. Pine is gay and 18 and came into some powers. Who WOULDN'T do what he did? :) I love that he now has Mike by his side as well. I'm a fan of this series and find myself looking forward to the next chapter!
Apr 2, 2020
4/3/20, 2:20 PM
Yup! That one checks off a lot of boxes for me
Anon
4/3/20, 1:34 PM
need less talk and more sex
4/3/20, 12:15 PM
I have to say love the story! It was fun and had some great character moments. if you ever get a chance to make it a actual book, I say go for it, I'm sure it would do great, even through it has the mind control fetish aspects it overall was very engaging and had me coming back for more.
Huriel19
4/3/20, 11:52 AM
You got me hooked to the story and characters. Fucking hot and well written.
4/3/20, 11:36 AM
One of my favorites in the site. Can't wait to see how it progresses further!!
4/3/20, 10:55 AM
Unusual, but hot. ......
4/3/20, 9:53 AM
Love the writing and how you take your time. that's a perfect way to make me very horny and hard !
Anonymous
4/3/20, 9:41 AM
is there an update yo this hehe