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4/3/20, 10:55 AM
Unusual, but hot. ......
4/3/20, 9:53 AM
Love the writing and how you take your time. that's a perfect way to make me very horny and hard !
Anonymous
4/3/20, 9:41 AM
is there an update yo this hehe
4/3/20, 9:31 AM
Thanks for all the feedback, was unexpected but surely happily received! I started implementing some of the suggestions in the next part already. I'll see if I can get it out today. I am not quite sure how long of a saga I was planning on making of this, though. I am already stretching it a little bit from the original draft, as this was meant to be more of a "stretching your writing muscles" -kind of a thing. I do have some plans for a future series, which I am impatient to get around to. We'll see!
4/3/20, 8:19 AM
Fuck yeah those are awesome ideas! Another good one is Daniels later telling MC he needs to keep up his workouts, so he asks MC to work out with him and be his "human weight". Daniels tells MC they have to work out in just jocks so Daniels can keep seeing MC's tight smooth hole the whole time. And Daniels uses MC as his human weight to hump his huge cock all over his body and ass and get off on it. MC obviously playing dumb and innocent the entire time pretending he doesn't know what's going on!
Hypno Slave Boy
4/3/20, 7:58 AM
Gerbil-Bee, are you doing alright man? Just checking in as we haven't seen anything from you in a while. Hope you and everyone else are staying safe out there boys!
Hypnominion
4/3/20, 7:43 AM
This was one of the most fascinating charaxter studies that i've read in years!
Jake
4/3/20, 7:27 AM
I agree, I'm hoping for an "oblivious foot job" where the roommate takes advantage of the MC maybe laying on his stomach with his feet in the air/in the lap of roommate. Maybe roommate has an ingenious idea of "tricking" MC into sucking him off by blindfolding him and telling him a lie in order to get off.
Mar 29, 2020
Hypnominion
4/3/20, 7:22 AM
I have the vapours...oh, my goodness! This is a brilliant example of a true, internal narrative of submission. This moment of transformative surrender is what Isearch for in my own erotic fantasies and fetish endeavors . Thank you!
4/3/20, 6:35 AM
it needs proof reading and editing. But before that, you need to work out the plot and tie up loose ends. Too disorganized, even for porn. Still, there's the possibility of a whopping good porn yarn with some work.