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Apr 2, 2020
4/3/20, 2:20 PM
Yup! That one checks off a lot of boxes for me
Anon
4/3/20, 1:34 PM
need less talk and more sex
4/3/20, 12:15 PM
I have to say love the story! It was fun and had some great character moments. if you ever get a chance to make it a actual book, I say go for it, I'm sure it would do great, even through it has the mind control fetish aspects it overall was very engaging and had me coming back for more.
Huriel19
4/3/20, 11:52 AM
You got me hooked to the story and characters. Fucking hot and well written.
4/3/20, 11:36 AM
One of my favorites in the site. Can't wait to see how it progresses further!!
4/3/20, 10:55 AM
Unusual, but hot. ......
4/3/20, 9:53 AM
Love the writing and how you take your time. that's a perfect way to make me very horny and hard !
Anonymous
4/3/20, 9:41 AM
is there an update yo this hehe
4/3/20, 9:31 AM
Thanks for all the feedback, was unexpected but surely happily received! I started implementing some of the suggestions in the next part already. I'll see if I can get it out today. I am not quite sure how long of a saga I was planning on making of this, though. I am already stretching it a little bit from the original draft, as this was meant to be more of a "stretching your writing muscles" -kind of a thing. I do have some plans for a future series, which I am impatient to get around to. We'll see!
4/3/20, 8:19 AM
Fuck yeah those are awesome ideas! Another good one is Daniels later telling MC he needs to keep up his workouts, so he asks MC to work out with him and be his "human weight". Daniels tells MC they have to work out in just jocks so Daniels can keep seeing MC's tight smooth hole the whole time. And Daniels uses MC as his human weight to hump his huge cock all over his body and ass and get off on it. MC obviously playing dumb and innocent the entire time pretending he doesn't know what's going on!