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Hypnominion
4/3/20, 7:43 AM
This was one of the most fascinating charaxter studies that i've read in years!
Jake
4/3/20, 7:27 AM
I agree, I'm hoping for an "oblivious foot job" where the roommate takes advantage of the MC maybe laying on his stomach with his feet in the air/in the lap of roommate. Maybe roommate has an ingenious idea of "tricking" MC into sucking him off by blindfolding him and telling him a lie in order to get off.
Mar 29, 2020
Hypnominion
4/3/20, 7:22 AM
I have the vapours...oh, my goodness! This is a brilliant example of a true, internal narrative of submission. This moment of transformative surrender is what Isearch for in my own erotic fantasies and fetish endeavors . Thank you!
4/3/20, 6:35 AM
it needs proof reading and editing. But before that, you need to work out the plot and tie up loose ends. Too disorganized, even for porn. Still, there's the possibility of a whopping good porn yarn with some work.
Anonymous
4/3/20, 5:10 AM
more more please
Anonymous
4/3/20, 4:03 AM
loved it and fiddler bears work, you told an electric story.
4/3/20, 1:51 AM
Why does he get lessons in Romanian when he is going to be Bulgarian?
Anonymous
4/3/20, 12:36 AM
Derek, I am a big fan of this kind of story, where a magical game forces random and unexpected changes on several hot guys gathered together. And you made this fun and familiar trope exceptionally hot. I felt like each round touched on one of my favorite kinks. I'm almost embarrassed to say how many times i got off while reading this. Thank you!
Anonymous
4/2/20, 11:49 PM
Love this! Hopefully more to come!
4/2/20, 11:15 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! BY THE GODS GIVE ME MORE! You have turned what could have been a typical enslavement/recruitment story into a very hot origin story... By the gods are they gonna fuck? this had me licking my nectar off the screen and running for my super suit.... nicely done.