Recent Comments

swngbthways
4/3/20, 3:13 PM
I like the direction you're taking this series. You're humanizing your characters. It makes the story not only relatable but believable as well. Pine is gay and 18 and came into some powers. Who WOULDN'T do what he did? :) I love that he now has Mike by his side as well. I'm a fan of this series and find myself looking forward to the next chapter!
Apr 2, 2020
4/3/20, 2:20 PM
Yup! That one checks off a lot of boxes for me
Anon
4/3/20, 1:34 PM
need less talk and more sex
4/3/20, 12:15 PM
I have to say love the story! It was fun and had some great character moments. if you ever get a chance to make it a actual book, I say go for it, I'm sure it would do great, even through it has the mind control fetish aspects it overall was very engaging and had me coming back for more.
Huriel19
4/3/20, 11:52 AM
You got me hooked to the story and characters. Fucking hot and well written.
4/3/20, 11:36 AM
One of my favorites in the site. Can't wait to see how it progresses further!!
4/3/20, 10:55 AM
Unusual, but hot. ......
4/3/20, 9:53 AM
Love the writing and how you take your time. that's a perfect way to make me very horny and hard !
Anonymous
4/3/20, 9:41 AM
is there an update yo this hehe
4/3/20, 9:31 AM
Thanks for all the feedback, was unexpected but surely happily received! I started implementing some of the suggestions in the next part already. I'll see if I can get it out today. I am not quite sure how long of a saga I was planning on making of this, though. I am already stretching it a little bit from the original draft, as this was meant to be more of a "stretching your writing muscles" -kind of a thing. I do have some plans for a future series, which I am impatient to get around to. We'll see!