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12/15/24, 9:39 AM
So dark, but so hot! I loved it!
12/15/24, 4:53 AM
love reading this story, it's wonderful! i would like to inform ya of some errors which haven't been fixed since it's publication... the word ++_'prize' was written as price_++ (in two previous chapters. i can't name right now?:confused:) i'm re-reading stacy's dad & going add it to my curated list of stories after i finish it!:) **this was review was written out on 11/9/24**
12/15/24, 2:07 AM
Fantastic chapter. And you know what’s on loop in my head? “… like a virgin, touched for the very first time…” ❤️
12/15/24, 1:48 AM
This was a great story! Perfect for the holidays. I’m looking forward to reading your other writing.
Evan
4/9/22, 12:09 PM
Another brilliant chapter. GoonNoob, you are fantastic. The writing is great, the characters are fantastic, the content is hot and it also has a touch of romance and sweetness. I love it all. I did think to myself that messing with a DubCon app was probably unwise (not that anyone in-universe would know that) but I wasn't expecting the turn around so soon. It was so much fun.

4/9/22, 3:37 PM
Thanks @Evan. Like the last story, I think the romance springs up from me as a way of reward for all the bad stuff I hurl my characters' way. One rule of my stories; you don't fuck with Dubcon. They will find out.

12/15/24, 1:35 AM
@[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535) I am so enthralled with this story and your ominous warning about Dubcon that i can't help wanting to fuck with Dubcon just to see what kind of reaction i might get. You can bet I'll be reading more of your stories with the excited intent to find a perfect way to fuck with Dubcon. I also wanted to tell you that i love your profile intro. You are totally but so lovingly twisted. I wish I could DM you but like your kinky enticing mind, my profile has been fucked up somehow and i am unable to access the forum or send direct messages. I do hope you get to read this and get a true sense of my adoring admiration for you and your amazing creativity. Bye for now. [I'm off to see the wizard. I _will_ find out what's really behind the curtain. ...Dubcon beware! ]
Dean
12/15/24, 1:24 AM
If I weren't locked myself right now I would have beaten my cock to death. Super Hot!
12/14/24, 11:46 PM
I just realized. Even permanent marker fades on the skin over time. I wonder how that would affected the rewritten men? That is, of course, assuming that the pen writing is not magically permanent which it probably is.
12/14/24, 11:14 PM
Personally i am not so much into the kind of humiliation this adventure would push me into, but the depth of mind control required to cause the guys to set themselves up like this and then forget how they got into it is hotter than hell. Moreover simply because of my aversion to humiliation per se, such an experience would certainly cement a very clear understanding of the level of control we are surrendering to. At this point too the thought of the level of personal private knowledge the app has acquired on them would be both arousing and frightening. I do believe that with the right participants, BDSM can create very close connections, something this story seems to be doing in spades. For all the ways this story touches my kinks, emotions, body and mind, plus the writer's imagination and ability to bring it alive, i am truly loving this story -- one of my all-time favorites!! Thanks again so much to GoonNoob!
12/14/24, 9:42 PM
One of my favorite stories already. Amazing! I hope it never ends
12/14/24, 9:18 PM
I was just led late to this party by my random search, but am so glad i ended up here. This story is so hot! I love the idea of being the subject of various forms of mind control, including hypnosis, as tools of domination and submission. I have a strong hunch that this chapter is just the start of a long process of power exchange and seduction. Coming late to the party actually has one great benefit. I don't have to wait to read the next chapter!! Speaking of which, I gotta go! Oh! where are my manners? Much thanks to GoonNoob for his creative mind, writing skills, and willingness to share! Thank you!!