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4/3/20, 8:19 AM
Fuck yeah those are awesome ideas! Another good one is Daniels later telling MC he needs to keep up his workouts, so he asks MC to work out with him and be his "human weight". Daniels tells MC they have to work out in just jocks so Daniels can keep seeing MC's tight smooth hole the whole time. And Daniels uses MC as his human weight to hump his huge cock all over his body and ass and get off on it. MC obviously playing dumb and innocent the entire time pretending he doesn't know what's going on!
Hypno Slave Boy
4/3/20, 7:58 AM
Gerbil-Bee, are you doing alright man? Just checking in as we haven't seen anything from you in a while. Hope you and everyone else are staying safe out there boys!
Hypnominion
4/3/20, 7:43 AM
This was one of the most fascinating charaxter studies that i've read in years!
Jake
4/3/20, 7:27 AM
I agree, I'm hoping for an "oblivious foot job" where the roommate takes advantage of the MC maybe laying on his stomach with his feet in the air/in the lap of roommate. Maybe roommate has an ingenious idea of "tricking" MC into sucking him off by blindfolding him and telling him a lie in order to get off.
Mar 29, 2020
Hypnominion
4/3/20, 7:22 AM
I have the vapours...oh, my goodness! This is a brilliant example of a true, internal narrative of submission. This moment of transformative surrender is what Isearch for in my own erotic fantasies and fetish endeavors . Thank you!
4/3/20, 6:35 AM
it needs proof reading and editing. But before that, you need to work out the plot and tie up loose ends. Too disorganized, even for porn. Still, there's the possibility of a whopping good porn yarn with some work.
Anonymous
4/3/20, 5:10 AM
more more please
Anonymous
4/3/20, 4:03 AM
loved it and fiddler bears work, you told an electric story.
4/3/20, 1:51 AM
Why does he get lessons in Romanian when he is going to be Bulgarian?
Anonymous
4/3/20, 12:36 AM
Derek, I am a big fan of this kind of story, where a magical game forces random and unexpected changes on several hot guys gathered together. And you made this fun and familiar trope exceptionally hot. I felt like each round touched on one of my favorite kinks. I'm almost embarrassed to say how many times i got off while reading this. Thank you!