Recent Comments

4/2/20, 9:53 PM
I liked the hero, and the beginning, but the story didn't go in a direction I found personally appealing. For the right kind of reader, this is definitely a relentlessly sexy, well written story. Good work.
4/2/20, 7:30 PM
please write more!!
Dec 15, 2014
TheAuthor
4/2/20, 6:55 PM
Okay, this is awesome.
Ng5hvlo4
4/2/20, 6:45 PM
Now I really want to know what happens next! This story has been full of nice twists and turns that get me going in a good way. Really liking where this is going!
Apr 28, 2019
4/2/20, 5:56 PM
sequel please?
4/2/20, 5:46 PM
Definitely a surprise twist that I didn't see coming. And is a positive one (so far), something you don't see too much on this site. I've been following along, but this part made me into a fan. I'll definiely follow along more closely with this.
Anonymous
4/2/20, 3:35 PM
Officer Rubber's transformation is extra hot... the roid gut is so sexy!!!
nycboot
4/2/20, 3:29 PM
Very nice!!
LongtimeFan
4/2/20, 3:24 PM
What a great story! I love how you painted the character's agony and pain, and the sheer joy that comes with the first release (I've never forgotten my own first time...thank you, Bowflex website!). Plus I love the little mention of actual Biblical scholarship re: homosexuality. Wooooooo! :)
4/2/20, 3:19 PM
Great story need that game to use sometime! Ha! Ha!