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7/1/25, 3:42 AM
I stumbled across this tonight and as some of the other commenters have mentioned, I wanted to sing the praises of this story. It was raw, it was magical, it was full of fear, and trying and hoping that you'd find your place. This story is magnificent and it left an impact

7/4/25, 12:00 AM
@[Knighte](/user/show/10018571) Thanks for the kind words!
7/3/25, 7:10 PM
Maximus's Father is human garbage. A very real-life example (clearly exaggerated) of how many people are treated when they are different. I understand what you're trying to do here.

7/3/25, 7:40 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) After seeing your comment last chapter, I _was_ wondering how you might feel once we actually met him. Certainly no contender for father of the year!

7/3/25, 11:03 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) Yes, I am going for something akin to how kids were and still are treated by parents when they might not exactly follow the exact ideals they do. I've sadly seen it more than once. Thankfully, this is exaggerated, but still something like this used to occur...
7/3/25, 7:47 PM
More little glimpses of Maximus breaking through! Colby is medicine for the soul :3 Good work!

7/3/25, 11:02 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) The best part of wakin' up might be a little Colby in your cup!
7/3/25, 10:32 PM
Very immersive and intriguing story so far. Reads well. Dialogue and inner thoughts line up with the thinking patterns of a late teens male. I'm curious how the three friends got changed before the story begins. Definitely wanting to learn more in future chapters.
Jul 2, 2025
7/3/25, 8:57 PM
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I love the concept, and the way you visualise it!
7/3/25, 8:56 PM
Really great story. I loved how it was written and how hot it was. Looking forward to more chapters!!
CHT
7/3/25, 12:10 AM
Were Rob and Jacen straight and hypnosis is making them gay? or were they always supposed to be gay? Hoping it is the former

7/3/25, 7:59 PM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) It's the former. The first chapter explains that Jacen was hypnotised. Perhaps unintentionally but, suggestively, subconsciously wanting to be.
7/3/25, 7:27 PM
Hot as hell!
Archie C.
7/3/25, 7:07 PM
Daaaaamn insanely hot! One of the best shrinking stories I've read in forever. I would kinda love to see Brett get shrunk down like his many victims, but I'd also love to see him start to steal inches and get big enough to rival the coach. Wherever you take it I'm hyped!
7/3/25, 7:04 PM
LOVED this!! Exactly the kind of story I was hoping for with this theme—can't wait for more!!