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3/30/20, 10:16 PM
uigi (why doesn’t the b emoji work PePeHands)
Martin
3/30/20, 8:48 PM
What a wonderful, lovely story. I really have a soft spot for these romantic first time sex stories. And I'd just say, Randy enchanted you with his looks, his smile, his scent and his words, so you were totally under his spell - like we all are when we find that special one that just presses our buttons! That's the special kind of mind control! Thank you for sharing this with us. But... did you ever see Randy again after this?
Bimarguycnj
3/30/20, 8:46 PM
glad to see mark join in , possible hint of a new construction team . would love to read who BT5365 was before he became a drone , i get the feeling he was once valued
Mar 28, 2020
Stephen
3/30/20, 8:28 PM
Loved the story. Great start, and development!
3/30/20, 7:42 PM
In all honesty I was pissed off to the point of frustration by the rambling beginning. Once you get to the meat of the story, the pacing is magic and I felt like I was right there with him. Pure magic, honestly; It was a joy and a privilege to read. And for a first story!? Wow. I would try get rid of almost half of the 'wordage' before the point of "...June turned into July". The apology (and I use the word in its old sense, i.e., 'to speak in one's own defense') in italics at the beginning I would delete completely, or reduce to a single sentence or very, very small paragraph. This story gets my 'favorite' for the time being. Well done.
Anonymous
3/30/20, 7:33 PM
Can't help but imagine Fez saying "remove my clothes bitch" and then hearing a laugh track. 😂
3/30/20, 7:28 PM
My fav story right now
Mar 24, 2020
CLB
3/30/20, 7:07 PM
Site "ate" my comment so trying again: Fun story and read… well done. For the record: Grindr Gold can turn me into the guy from the pic anytime. Yum!
3/30/20, 6:50 PM
Well Done mate. I won't spoil it by saying what I hope happens in further chapters!!!