Recent Comments

3/30/20, 7:42 PM
In all honesty I was pissed off to the point of frustration by the rambling beginning. Once you get to the meat of the story, the pacing is magic and I felt like I was right there with him. Pure magic, honestly; It was a joy and a privilege to read. And for a first story!? Wow. I would try get rid of almost half of the 'wordage' before the point of "...June turned into July". The apology (and I use the word in its old sense, i.e., 'to speak in one's own defense') in italics at the beginning I would delete completely, or reduce to a single sentence or very, very small paragraph. This story gets my 'favorite' for the time being. Well done.
Anonymous
3/30/20, 7:33 PM
Can't help but imagine Fez saying "remove my clothes bitch" and then hearing a laugh track. 😂
3/30/20, 7:28 PM
My fav story right now
Mar 24, 2020
CLB
3/30/20, 7:07 PM
Site "ate" my comment so trying again: Fun story and read… well done. For the record: Grindr Gold can turn me into the guy from the pic anytime. Yum!
3/30/20, 6:50 PM
Well Done mate. I won't spoil it by saying what I hope happens in further chapters!!!
Anonymous
3/30/20, 6:03 PM
Definitely my favorite part by far, I love revenge TFs hopefully you do the story like this more often. So well written and gets me instantly hard
Anonymous
3/30/20, 4:38 PM
this is one hot story!!!
Anonymous
3/30/20, 2:48 PM
I like the perspective from both people in the story.
Anonymous
3/30/20, 2:42 PM
Hope there's more!!! Glad you clarified a bit. I didn't need you to defend it personally, this is a genre for fantasy, if they aren't comfortable they can opt out by not reading it! Gosh they don't have to read it! Many of us do enjoy a darker kind of story like this, and hope you keep going!