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Anonymous
3/30/20, 4:38 PM
this is one hot story!!!
Anonymous
3/30/20, 2:48 PM
I like the perspective from both people in the story.
Anonymous
3/30/20, 2:42 PM
Hope there's more!!! Glad you clarified a bit. I didn't need you to defend it personally, this is a genre for fantasy, if they aren't comfortable they can opt out by not reading it! Gosh they don't have to read it! Many of us do enjoy a darker kind of story like this, and hope you keep going!
Martin
3/30/20, 2:32 PM
Great story! And end of this episode made me rock hard. Please don't stop!
Anonymous
3/30/20, 1:27 PM
MOREE PLEASEEE
Mar 29, 2020
3/30/20, 1:23 PM
Awesome but it would be damn interesting to know what led to this and how the tist looks like more in detail. Needless to say I would love being the one that breaks
3/30/20, 1:00 PM
Thank you for you story it is well written . I felt like i was your shadow in this story. It reminded me of all the feelings that I experienced with my first time. I also enjoyed / related to having happy memories big meal times with the whole family.
RicanCub
3/30/20, 11:30 AM
This was AMAZING! !!
3/30/20, 11:26 AM
Thanks for this. I found myself becoming more absorbed in your story as it progressed. The fact that it is true made it all the more interesting to me (I love hearing peoples' life experiences and tales). This 'first time' certainly seemed like a thrilling adventure! The sex with the people nearby added the perfect spice... Haha, I felt like a naughty voyeur myself reading your depiction of the event, and it ended (in my opinion) in a bitter-sweet way. Thanks again for sharing; this was a nice treat.
3/30/20, 10:34 AM
This story has me hoping for more. Hits all the right buttons for me-so please keep writing.