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Anonymous
3/29/20, 10:48 PM
fantastic story and very hot. ignore the troll comment above - more stories like this please!
Anonymous
3/29/20, 10:45 PM
very hard to find this arousing when the main character repeatedly mind controls me into wanting to punch him in the face.
Anonymous
3/29/20, 10:09 PM
The mind control is appealing, but the ridiculous levels of degradation, violence, and dehumanization are disturbing, especially if you visualize scenes vividly as I do. I also agree with the other comments about the racist overtones.
3/29/20, 9:48 PM
Man, I laughed out loud at the author note. Totally, fantasy is the only place I'm hitting up a club right now. (I'm not a big club guy anyhow. Kinda wish I had a friend like Ray-Ray to help me out with that!)
Mar 29, 2020
3/29/20, 9:21 PM
Again, another piece that uses brevity in such a beautiful way. You again do a magnificent job of showing the struggle and the submission of the individual; plus the master being in the memories is a beautifully cruel touch.
3/29/20, 9:16 PM
That was awesome. cant wait for part 2!
3/29/20, 9:14 PM
Nice addition to the story; you definitely keep the spirit of the first two chapters. I like the dream and the way the bamboo fountain sets out a rhythm that draws Oyama in. Plus good choice to put in Fushimi Inari Shrine in Kyoto as the place where Oyama must go to try and rid himself of the kitsune. Although it does raise the problem of Oyama not cleaning himself; if it goes to the shrine without proper cleaning, Inari might not answer his petition to be rid of the kitsune. Something to consider in the next section.
3/29/20, 8:52 PM
Man this is good - THANK YOU for writing this story - so so hot....
Lusty Stallion
3/29/20, 8:51 PM
eventially. people were asking aboit photos for this series & i havent had any time recently