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7/4/25, 4:15 AM
Incredible. Hit all my notes. Jealous of Willy lol.

7/4/25, 7:22 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks!! I’m a huge fan of your work so that means a lot. Hehehe Willy is definitely living his best life. ♥️
7/4/25, 7:20 AM
Didn’t expect to see this series again. I’m glad u chose to bring it new life, nice chapter to get us back into this universe. Can I ask, what are u planning?
Grieyson
7/4/25, 6:21 AM
I, too, hope we get a new chapter soon. Father/son corruption is 🔥
Jul 2, 2025
Anonymous
7/2/25, 2:58 PM
I liked the story, but the slur at the very end caught me off guard and took me out of it a bit-

7/2/25, 3:20 PM
@Anonymous I’m sorry to hear that. Which one though?

7/4/25, 5:08 AM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) The R word. People use it meaning stupid, the word is used against neurodivergent people
7/4/25, 3:07 AM
wow!! i like this!! i love bret y nate
7/1/25, 3:42 AM
I stumbled across this tonight and as some of the other commenters have mentioned, I wanted to sing the praises of this story. It was raw, it was magical, it was full of fear, and trying and hoping that you'd find your place. This story is magnificent and it left an impact

7/4/25, 12:00 AM
@[Knighte](/user/show/10018571) Thanks for the kind words!
7/3/25, 7:10 PM
Maximus's Father is human garbage. A very real-life example (clearly exaggerated) of how many people are treated when they are different. I understand what you're trying to do here.

7/3/25, 7:40 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) After seeing your comment last chapter, I _was_ wondering how you might feel once we actually met him. Certainly no contender for father of the year!

7/3/25, 11:03 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) Yes, I am going for something akin to how kids were and still are treated by parents when they might not exactly follow the exact ideals they do. I've sadly seen it more than once. Thankfully, this is exaggerated, but still something like this used to occur...
7/3/25, 7:47 PM
More little glimpses of Maximus breaking through! Colby is medicine for the soul :3 Good work!

7/3/25, 11:02 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) The best part of wakin' up might be a little Colby in your cup!
7/3/25, 10:32 PM
Very immersive and intriguing story so far. Reads well. Dialogue and inner thoughts line up with the thinking patterns of a late teens male. I'm curious how the three friends got changed before the story begins. Definitely wanting to learn more in future chapters.
Jul 2, 2025
7/3/25, 8:57 PM
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I love the concept, and the way you visualise it!