Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/29/20, 5:43 PM
great story! looking forward to read the superhero muscle transformation!
3/29/20, 5:40 PM
Great story!!! I love this a lot! But I you want others to help you continue this, you need to make it a community story ;D But I like your style, I hope you continue this on your own first before make it a community story ^ ^
Anonymous
3/29/20, 4:48 PM
Too violent for me. Might be some other people's cup of tea but not mine. also, the "Asians as submissive bottom bitches" stereotype is very off putting. I would've (possibly) enjoyed it more had the "master" be Asian and the bottom "bitch" be Caucasian. Probably not reading succeeding chapters.
Ng5hvlo4
3/29/20, 3:58 PM
I am in total agreement with nycboot's comments. This is a most excellent series; I feel so immersed into it and it reads very naturally. I too am anxious to see how this developed, especially once the pair are more open with each other. The sex is nice, but what is really driving it in for me is the strong feelings that are growing between them and the love that is budding. I can see the doctor changing in subtle ways as much as the slave is changing in more obvious ways, feeding each other and changing one another. Also, glad to hear that you are no longer ill!
3/29/20, 3:42 PM
nice.
3/29/20, 3:41 PM
hot story. please continue
3/29/20, 3:39 PM
Thanks Hypnothrill! This is my first story ever, so not sure how it'll be received. Looking forward to continuing with it.
3/29/20, 2:44 PM
will we see the new year party soon?
Biboy
3/29/20, 2:02 PM
HOT..would love for Todd to loose it all!
nycboot
3/29/20, 1:38 PM
I think is probably the most difficult chapter - to show Ivan's gradual acceptance of Hector in a physical way - and you've done it very well. It's a very smooth transition, never feels forced. I really admire that you have to have the details in mind as well as the overall arc of the entire story - working on micro- as well as macro-levels. Quite an accomplishment - bravo! And of course, I'm anxious to see how Hector is able to break down Ivan more and more. :)