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Anonymous
3/29/20, 10:50 AM
spectacular
3/29/20, 10:19 AM
love this man! keep it up :)
Anonymous
3/29/20, 8:56 AM
what about the dad do you want JoSmith to do? i think the story between them both is still developing and maybe in the future, there may be something happening since we still dont know a lot of the chip. idk, just theorizing
Mar 28, 2020
CopsRhot
3/29/20, 7:35 AM
Love cops that end up getting corrupted. I especially like stories where the cop's morals get compromised. I agree with Pupscout's comment. The mind control feels too easy and abrupt. I also think that there should be more challenge in taking down the cops. Overall though, you are doing a good job!
3/29/20, 7:28 AM
love the idea. The action not for me. Also Rick seems more an assume to me than Chad so any glee from revenge feels forced. any reminder of what Chad did passively pales for Rick actively doing. especially if analogous with different circumstances. oh No he smirks at opening jars and grabs his lover. Rick smug and entitled throughout and more than groped not lovers. shrug. But imaginative contrast of transformation and consideration of position and thoughts. plus setup and insight to changes in perspective character.
Mar 28, 2020
Anonymous
3/29/20, 7:07 AM
An absolutely hot tale. To echo others, nothing like oblivious cops being taken advantage of by prisoners.
Canned Food
3/29/20, 4:15 AM
I definitely like the progress of the story! However, can we do something about the dad :(
nycboot
3/29/20, 12:59 AM
I think this is a stand-alone story. (For me, the image detracts from it. That guy is very good looking. With a name like Gruff I imagine a much more tough-looking person.) I would have thought that a slave who lost his Master would be untethered, very unsure of himself and how to navigate the world around him. So your take on this - that the slave was taken against his will (and is, in fact, straight) is an interesting take. Very nice story - thank you for sharing!
Mar 28, 2020
3/29/20, 12:09 AM
What a hot story. Please keep this story going. I need more chapters.
3/28/20, 11:54 PM
A real hot story.. What will happen know that Mark has become a drone ? Please continue :ob..............