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3/28/20, 9:53 PM
will we see a sequel soon?
Martin
3/28/20, 9:14 PM
> this kind of posts should really have a tag like reader or something. That way one could find gems like this more easy This style, when the author is addressing the reader directly, is usually called "second-person". I've added that tag, I know at least one other story which used that approach.
3/28/20, 8:49 PM
will we see part 3 soon?
3/28/20, 7:50 PM
this kind of posts should really have a tag like reader or something. That way one could find gems like this more easy
3/28/20, 7:48 PM
The first chapter of one of my favourite series. Thrilled to see it on here!
Mar 28, 2020
3/28/20, 7:12 PM
this needs more, please!!
Mar 28, 2020
Ky'Ro
3/28/20, 7:09 PM
Wow this was really hot. I like cop slave stories a lot. I hope you will do more
Anonymous
3/28/20, 6:53 PM
I was hoping to see what total rebuild would be like under Gruff's rule, so I was kinda disappointed that it ended so quickly. But I am curious about this plot thread and I want to read more I dunno what your plans are for future chapters,or if theres going to be any, but I'm hoping Gruff being "free" is not totally true. Im hoping that the system in the gym would still continue, albeit that Gruff would be a more lenient master
Mar 28, 2020
3/28/20, 6:51 PM
Very well done!