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Mar 28, 2020
3/28/20, 6:51 PM
Very well done!
Mar 28, 2020
3/28/20, 6:18 PM
This was quite sexy.
3/28/20, 6:11 PM
I hope Hal gets his happy ending, I mean he learned his lesson, So I think he can be free now
Beardfull1
3/28/20, 5:52 PM
Very nice!!!! Three different transformations to satisfy different tastes. Thank you for continuing this series. I await for the next chapter impatiently and when I see you have posted a new one I get an instant erection!!! I'm a captive fan! Keep bringing them!!!!
3/28/20, 5:30 PM
Like the rest of the comments here already, I too LOVE THIS! The characters are kind and writing is EXCELLENT! The protagonist made KINDNESS, in the form of being a refuge for someone else, take PRECEDENCE over sex and sexuality. THAT is a concept that's RARE here. This leaves me wanting MORE. And to me THAT is ALWAYS a good sign of GREAT writing. MORE PLEASE.
Willie Cici
3/28/20, 4:56 PM
Don't forget some storyline twists to motivate the reader to proceed to the next chapter. If you're going to write a series/sequel drivern story, you need build-up, suspense, the desire to know 'what's gonna happen next'. H-Thrill, 'The Master', explained the premise. Don't ignore his words of wisdom.
Limbo
3/28/20, 4:48 PM
I love this. Still waiting for the next one though.
3/28/20, 4:30 PM
Hy guys really feelin' the love. I really am a 'concept' writer and it took a lot for me to publish this story. I was expecting it to be received badly. @drakkonflye; I'll continue slowly bleeding them up once I re-edit them to fit GSS's formatting a little better (and catch all those blasted spelling errors!). If I have the ability, I may even rewrite the magician's parties completely, as a sort of "best of" series of characters from other stories (so the likes of John and Abe are present in the background, PizzaDaddy, Freddy-bear etc) same story, just with up to date cameos.
3/28/20, 4:15 PM
Completely lost me on Chapter 7 . With all the bible belt racism stuff I live in the Bible Belt of SC Never experienced any thing like that. Even went to a concert of Gay Mens Chorus in a Baptist church. I did like the story but just couldn't stomach the mis-information..
3/28/20, 4:14 PM
Excelente trabajo, entraría a detalle del por qué me gustó, pero Piko ha hecho una excelente descripción. Sigue escribiendo