Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/28/20, 6:53 PM
I was hoping to see what total rebuild would be like under Gruff's rule, so I was kinda disappointed that it ended so quickly. But I am curious about this plot thread and I want to read more I dunno what your plans are for future chapters,or if theres going to be any, but I'm hoping Gruff being "free" is not totally true. Im hoping that the system in the gym would still continue, albeit that Gruff would be a more lenient master
Mar 28, 2020
3/28/20, 6:51 PM
Very well done!
Mar 28, 2020
3/28/20, 6:18 PM
This was quite sexy.
3/28/20, 6:11 PM
I hope Hal gets his happy ending, I mean he learned his lesson, So I think he can be free now
Beardfull1
3/28/20, 5:52 PM
Very nice!!!! Three different transformations to satisfy different tastes. Thank you for continuing this series. I await for the next chapter impatiently and when I see you have posted a new one I get an instant erection!!! I'm a captive fan! Keep bringing them!!!!
3/28/20, 5:30 PM
Like the rest of the comments here already, I too LOVE THIS! The characters are kind and writing is EXCELLENT! The protagonist made KINDNESS, in the form of being a refuge for someone else, take PRECEDENCE over sex and sexuality. THAT is a concept that's RARE here. This leaves me wanting MORE. And to me THAT is ALWAYS a good sign of GREAT writing. MORE PLEASE.
Willie Cici
3/28/20, 4:56 PM
Don't forget some storyline twists to motivate the reader to proceed to the next chapter. If you're going to write a series/sequel drivern story, you need build-up, suspense, the desire to know 'what's gonna happen next'. H-Thrill, 'The Master', explained the premise. Don't ignore his words of wisdom.
Limbo
3/28/20, 4:48 PM
I love this. Still waiting for the next one though.
3/28/20, 4:30 PM
Hy guys really feelin' the love. I really am a 'concept' writer and it took a lot for me to publish this story. I was expecting it to be received badly. @drakkonflye; I'll continue slowly bleeding them up once I re-edit them to fit GSS's formatting a little better (and catch all those blasted spelling errors!). If I have the ability, I may even rewrite the magician's parties completely, as a sort of "best of" series of characters from other stories (so the likes of John and Abe are present in the background, PizzaDaddy, Freddy-bear etc) same story, just with up to date cameos.
3/28/20, 4:15 PM
Completely lost me on Chapter 7 . With all the bible belt racism stuff I live in the Bible Belt of SC Never experienced any thing like that. Even went to a concert of Gay Mens Chorus in a Baptist church. I did like the story but just couldn't stomach the mis-information..