Recent Comments

3/27/20, 2:57 PM
Thanks for the comments! I wrote this during my student days, so my time was somewhat limited. I haven't gone back to it since those days, but the suggestions sound good.and constructive thus far. I've got more of the story already written, but i can try to integrate some of these comments into it. I made it a community story, so anyone can also feel free to add details...
3/27/20, 2:41 PM
wow! was this one related to the Praise Goddess series? Pretty steamy too. So, what happens to Erick?
3/27/20, 2:24 PM
Definitely a fun story, would love to read more from you.
3/27/20, 2:23 PM
Interesting stuff. What happened to his friends and will he ever cross paths with them? Mike seemed like a good guy. 🙂
3/27/20, 12:02 PM
I will continue doing my Pharaoh's bidding. You will witness the rest of my work. Let the stories set in and you will be prepared for His reawakening.
Slave Abdamelek
3/27/20, 11:59 AM
Thank you for the feedback guys. It's what keeps me writing and gives an idea how to best tantalize you.
Anonymous
3/27/20, 11:14 AM
Hope to see a follow up featuring the downfall of Fury along with Phil Coulson
3/27/20, 9:28 AM
Bravisimo!!! A magnificent series! I look forward to seeing more with bated breath. Seldom have I run into hot stories here that made me cheer and brought tears to my eyes as well. I am in awe.
3/27/20, 8:06 AM
BRAVO!
Albi Allred
3/27/20, 2:24 AM
do a spiderman chapter