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Slave Abdamelek
3/27/20, 11:59 AM
Thank you for the feedback guys. It's what keeps me writing and gives an idea how to best tantalize you.
Anonymous
3/27/20, 11:14 AM
Hope to see a follow up featuring the downfall of Fury along with Phil Coulson
3/27/20, 9:28 AM
Bravisimo!!! A magnificent series! I look forward to seeing more with bated breath. Seldom have I run into hot stories here that made me cheer and brought tears to my eyes as well. I am in awe.
3/27/20, 8:06 AM
BRAVO!
Albi Allred
3/27/20, 2:24 AM
do a spiderman chapter
3/27/20, 1:09 AM
Wow. That was great!
3/27/20, 12:34 AM
next part soon?
3/27/20, 12:21 AM
Amazing idea and execution; to go from seer and author to part of the story. Really makes me want to enter a few stories on this site. Well done; so now that you're in your world what are you going to do for your Pharaoh?
nycboot
3/27/20, 12:00 AM
I love self-referential stories. :)
nycboot
3/26/20, 11:47 PM
I've re-read this chapter again. In the prologue the guy intones a prayer. But in this chapter, it's as if the pacing of the words is a prayer. Especially after Adom has shocked Raveed into submission. Beautiful!