Recent Comments

3/26/20, 6:42 PM
I love the premise of this story, but to me, it just feels too fast-paced. We shift so quickly between different settings and perspectives that it's hard for me to get my bearings. And the big info dump at the beginning means that there's not much sense of mystery and suspense. But I'd still love to see another chapter, because I think that if you use some slightly different storytelling techniques, this could be an amazingly hot story.
3/26/20, 6:10 PM
Indeed, I have! I posted it on mcstories.com a few years ago. I'm posting some older stories here to motivate myself to write some new material. With Covid-19 ravishing the world, seems like the perfect opportunity ;-) Did you enjoy the story?
Anonymous
3/26/20, 6:07 PM
This looks very familiar as if I've seen it before....just can't recall where at the moment. Did you perhaps post it on another site in the past?
oxstorm
3/26/20, 5:32 PM
cant wait to see what happens to Adam
3/26/20, 4:06 PM
A hot piece, great writing and interesting story but confusing as hell with no real resolution. I have no real idea what was going on! Still liked it though.
3/26/20, 3:42 PM
aww! that was unexpectedly cute.
3/26/20, 2:15 PM
RAWR it is back!
Anonymous
3/26/20, 8:11 AM
love this!
Mar 24, 2020
Evan
3/26/20, 7:37 AM
Great idea, love the concept. Thanks!
3/26/20, 5:00 AM
more please!!!!!