Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/25/20, 6:18 AM
this is so good? humiliation without over the top cruelty, a sprinkling of impish monkey's paw type wish fulfillment, a victim who starts out as kind of a tool and ends up a pleasant enough dimwit with a doting partner, oral fixation without that being the only thing brought to the table, snappy well written dialogue, a transformative force with a nice eerie undercurrent, and at the end of an all an older dude with bangin tits? the absolute dream. also as someone who likes thumb/finger sucking as like. a compulsion bc of mental changes but isnt super into age play, that touch was a pleasant surprise! im very very happy :-)
Mar 24, 2020
Drake Nightstrom
3/25/20, 4:48 AM
If you cleaned up the writing a bit, this story would really be great. Just some pieces are a bit disjointed or don't read well.
Anonymous
3/25/20, 4:14 AM
I love this so much! I love it when older, sexy men are the victims of transformation. The big pecs and ass are always a fave,a nd the thumbsucking was a surprising kick that I enjoyed :)
3/25/20, 3:05 AM
fantastic job! really liked the ending too. ambiguous yet strangely hopeful. keep up the good work.
3/25/20, 2:56 AM
You had a really interesting idea going there, but I felt like the end part was very rushed. I love the concept, but would like to have seen some more between when the group banded together and when they were immediately taken down.
3/25/20, 2:53 AM
Thanks for continuing this story. Very hot! I look forward to reading more.
3/25/20, 2:30 AM
HAWT!!!
3/25/20, 2:28 AM
AMAZING JOB For ALL 3 Chapters for THIS STORY; @Jeep!!! SO HAWT as TWO DADDIES - HumanMuscleRoidedDADDY/DaemonMuscleDADDY!!!
Obedient Servant
3/25/20, 1:47 AM
Touchstone, you are a sexy genius. your stories always make me come. I wish I had a Daddy like this :-)
3/25/20, 1:06 AM
love this story hoping more chapters are comming and we get to see Thanos enjoy his boys more