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3/22/20, 3:04 PM
Yeah, obviously this is purely fantasy since this--and, well, let's face it, most stories on the mind-control site are lol--but I wonder what you mean by 'counter-intuitive' tbh. And yes, Robbie very much enjoys Morgan fat! And, frankly, so does Morgan.
3/22/20, 2:41 PM
Aww, was hoping he would let him remember but still return to normal. Would've love having that special relationship without ruining his life. It's still a great story though! I love good endings!
Mar 6, 2020
Anonymous
3/22/20, 2:13 PM
Beautifully done. I understand your reasoning behind not wanting to write more, and as a story of the "fall," that we all experience in hypnosis, this is indeed complete in and of itself. But your poetic prose is mesmerising and I would love to read more about the dynamic that has been created and where it will lead, if you find the inspiration to do so. Well done, and regardless of whether it is this story or others, please keep writing.
Anonymous
3/22/20, 1:59 PM
Agree with the above. Keep up the very excellent work. And, if you are the voice of part 2, message me please. :-)
3/22/20, 1:56 PM
I loved Class, and this is a really nicely done take on it. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of it.
3/22/20, 1:53 PM
I loved it! And the ending was very sweet and wholesome :)
3/22/20, 1:52 PM
Maybe it's because I haven't read the original Kingsbury Harbor, but I'm a little confused. Nick became a ghost, his body got possessed by Puka and reality was rewritten to make Puka and Marco flaming gay sluts? Did he have some control over Puka and Marcos transformations? And afterwards he just went off to peep and watch other gay people around?
Anonymous
3/22/20, 1:50 PM
Fantastic. I see there is one more chapter at this point, and already I hope there will be many more to come. Very, very well written, erotic and extremely hot.
Van
3/22/20, 12:02 PM
Class by Watchfire was always such a super hot story and it was always such a pity it was so short and he never wrote more of it. This was a reimagining of it and I really hope you continue it!
3/22/20, 12:01 PM
I really, REALLY enjoyed. It was hot and so sweet.