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3/22/20, 11:06 PM
I could go for a beer myself & hope for things to work out.
Mar 20, 2020
Martin
3/22/20, 10:45 PM
That was a hot story, just made for fapping! The formatting could use some work though :)
Aug 27, 2006
3/22/20, 9:51 PM
The story is a classic version of my favorite genre. The writer doesn't give us details nor lets us know of the powers. Instead, we are left with a jock in his prime in his ultimate path to profession sports.... with his dick entrapped. Yes, he still has his fuck-stick but the thing has been deemed interminable. Its the way the writer screeches us to a halt in this haute incredible bro jock-boy. His cock has become entrapped without so much as a chastity or denial aspect.... f-u-c-k-i-n hot. Of course, someone in this genre, I would enjoy seeing him suddenly turned-on by his own smell. His pillow, jockstrap, cut-tank, nikes.... they all illicit further fury on his mind succombed to that incredible jock smell which may be his... but now denied to be controlled. I also enjoy the very brief note on his attempt to fuck his girl. The subtlety is strikingly hot. Thanks.
swngbthways
3/22/20, 7:43 PM
This story reverberated to me. What gay guy DIDN'T have a straight friend in his life he would trade the world for. BUT the RIGHT thing needed to be done. BRAVO!
Anonymous
3/22/20, 6:19 PM
Great to see this series being brought back! Would it be too optimistic to hope that it means we’ve got new entries on the way??
3/22/20, 5:32 PM
are you making anymore parts. this story is
3/22/20, 3:04 PM
Yeah, obviously this is purely fantasy since this--and, well, let's face it, most stories on the mind-control site are lol--but I wonder what you mean by 'counter-intuitive' tbh. And yes, Robbie very much enjoys Morgan fat! And, frankly, so does Morgan.
3/22/20, 2:41 PM
Aww, was hoping he would let him remember but still return to normal. Would've love having that special relationship without ruining his life. It's still a great story though! I love good endings!
Mar 6, 2020
Anonymous
3/22/20, 2:13 PM
Beautifully done. I understand your reasoning behind not wanting to write more, and as a story of the "fall," that we all experience in hypnosis, this is indeed complete in and of itself. But your poetic prose is mesmerising and I would love to read more about the dynamic that has been created and where it will lead, if you find the inspiration to do so. Well done, and regardless of whether it is this story or others, please keep writing.
Anonymous
3/22/20, 1:59 PM
Agree with the above. Keep up the very excellent work. And, if you are the voice of part 2, message me please. :-)