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3/21/20, 7:31 AM
This was a really awesome chapter. I loved how Todd mercilessly took everything away from Joe. At first, I thought Todd should've wiped that chess board pieces clean, but then I realized it was very poetic to leave him with nothing but that pawn piece. Totally magnificent. Job well done!
LongtimeFan
3/21/20, 7:01 AM
Loving this story! You pay such attention to the details of getting niiiiiiice and plump. The mental slowing down is the perfect pairing, too. Great job!
Leo
3/21/20, 6:56 AM
I love the romantic feel of this story, but wish there was more mind control; something like “Stacy’s Dad”. That story is amazing! <3
Mar 20, 2020
Moby
3/21/20, 5:31 AM
This was great! Hope you write more in this series
3/21/20, 4:11 AM
@Darmani: I guess you're asking what the source material is; if that's the question, then you want to look at Hypnocigarboy's original series [The Symbiote](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newSeries/show/153033). It is a good idea to look at that as some things from that storyline will come up in later parts.
Onyx
3/21/20, 3:08 AM
I am loving where this is going and intrigued to read more! Muscle Bottoms always seen to be a rarity so very happy to read a story with one.
3/21/20, 1:10 AM
can't wait to see what comes next!!
3/20/20, 10:28 PM
Ok, one hand, its a shame that the mind control parts are less and less, but on the other one, I love the chemistry between them and their relationship getting stronger and challenged <3
3/20/20, 9:30 PM
Did you move these to a new site?
3/20/20, 9:28 PM
@New Guy In Town Hey whats the order of and stories I can read this in to get a feel for things. I suspect not exact continuity but evolving of concept and understanding how develop and what to expect is needed? Links please?